Friday, August 29, 2014

Expressive Writing!

Would you rather go Overseas?

I would love to go overseas with my family and friends. First place I would love to go to is America and from there to Australia. I really wanted to go Australia to see my family and make new friends. At America I would want to go Disney land and other theme park's and that is my wish. You would love going to theme parks right? Isn't it really exiting to go overseas? but the thing is that I don't want to come back home because I would love it there. 

1 comment:

Rosrine said...

Hi Rachel,
This piece of writing was very interesting, I really liked the way you explained why you wanted to go to that place, It will be a bit better if you checked your spelling. Keep up the great work.

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